“ I think that everything composed made a bunch of
sense. But, think on this, what if you added a little content?
I am not saying your content isn't good., however what if you added something that
makes people want more? I mean Dj Mixing for party
is kinda boring. You might look at Yahoo's front page and see how they create post titles to get viewers to click.
You might add a video or a pic or two to get people interested about what you've got
to say. Just my opinion, it would make your posts
a little livelier. ”