“ I believe what you wrote made a bunch of sense.
But, consider this, what if you were to write a killer headline?
I ain't suggesting your information is not good, but what if you added something that makes people want more?
I mean Dj Mixing for party is kinda plain. You could peek at Yahoo's front page and see how they write
news titles to get viewers to click. You might add a
related video or a picture or two to grab readers excited about everything've written. Just my opinion, it might
bring your posts a little livelier. ”