“ What you composed made a great deal of sense.
But, consider this, suppose you added a little information? I am
not saying your content is not good., but what if you added a post title
that makes people want more? I mean Dj Mixing for
party is a little plain. You might look at Yahoo's front page and note how they write article headlines to grab people to click.
You might try adding a video or a picture or two to get people excited about what you've got to say.
In my opinion, it would bring your website a little bit
more interesting. ”